I recently turned in a literature review that is part of a research proposal and

I recently turned in a literature review that is part of a research proposal and made a 0/30. I am going to attach the orginal paper that I scored a 0/30, and the one with the annoted revision comments from my professor and my version of a revision. (I tried to change the direction on if it but I’m still not sure if it is right). But, basically the whole thing needed to be done over because my professor said it was more like a research paper and not a literature review. In addition to this, I also need my discussion board post completed. It is only the Application for Institutional Review Board. The whole top section about myself & my professor can be left blank. I will link a youtube video that my professor provided step-by-step for this here: https://youtu.be/CxzpZNu0D3Y. I have also attached the instructions for this discussion board. Only pages 2,3,&4 should be completed by you. The rest I can plug in. Thank you. 
The sources I used for the literature review are here:
References
Álvarez-Godos,
M., Ferreira, C., & Vieira, M. J. (2023). A systematic review of actions
aimed at  
university students with
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T. M. (2022). Paying Attention: The Lived Experiences of Female ADHD
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S. J., Kim, Y., & Kwak, Y. (2018). Difficulties faced by university
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