The attached document outlines the requirements for the research paper, while the other document is my research paper. I would like to reduce the AI tone of my research paper and address any repetitive content that may appear across different paragraphs.
I think it would be more effective to structure the article by directly addressing specific points sequentially rather than dividing it into sections like Artwork Description, Contextualizing the Anthropocene, etc (what I have right now). For instance, I think for my essay, we could organize the content around a central thesis and discuss Point 1, Point 2, and Point 3 in subsequent paragraphs. In other words, I would like my essay to have a clear structure, such as starting with Point 1 (topic sentence + evidence + further elaboration), and so on. Currently, the structure of my essay feels unclear, and the content seems a bit disorganized. （Please look through my comments in the word doc)
Additionally, without including the bibliography, my essay currently spans 9 pages. I aim to reduce it to around 7 pages. It feels overly lengthy at the moment.

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